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当你大概想表达的意思:
【不是翻译,是当你想表达这个意思,会怎么说,展开说的越多越好】
尽管人们的生活从各个客观标准来看都在变得更好,但却有很多的人感到绝望、沮丧、孤独和空虚。很多人都缺乏人生的意义。
人生的意义和幸福不同,幸福是一种舒适安逸的状态,但意义是超越自身的事物,以及挖掘自身的最大潜能。有人生意义的人才更具韧性。
不会组织语言的人说的:
Even though our lives are getting better from many aspects, but there are still many people feel sad, lonely and empty. They think their lives are lack of meaning.
Happiness is being comfortable, but meaning is helping others and trying your best. People with meaning are stronger.
问题点评:
1. 连词重复:Even though/Although 和 but 不能连用
2. 谓语动词多余或缺失:there be 句型中不能直接加动词原形
可以改为 there are still many people feeling sad...(现在分词作定语)
或there are still many people who feel sad...(定语从句)
3. 固定搭配错误:缺乏意义,lack 后面不用of,lack 作动词时,直接接宾语:lack sth.缺少某物。
4. 词不达意:from many aspects 首先不常见,可以说 in many ways
其次,这里本来想表达的是从各种客观标准来看,TED原文用的是objectively better according to nearly every standard
5. 词汇过于简单:比如 sad, lonely and empty
可以换成hopeless, depressed and alone等
TED中超强组织语言
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Even though life is getting objectively better according to nearly every conceivable standard, more people feel hopeless, depressed and alone. There's an emptiness gnawing away at people. The root cause of this despair is not a lack of happiness. It's a lack of something else — a lack of having meaning in life.
尽管人们的生活从各种客观标准来看的话都在变得更好,但却有更多人感到绝望、沮丧和孤独。一种空虚感在啃噬着人们。这种绝望的并非缺乏幸福,而是缺乏另一种东西 —— 缺乏人生的意义。
conceivable /kənˈsiːvəbl/ adj.可以想象的;可想象的;可信的
gnaw /nɔː/ v.啃;咬;啮
Is there more to life than being happy? And what's the difference between being happy and having meaning in life?
人生除了快乐之外还有更多吗?快乐和有意义的生活之间有什么区别?
Many psychologists define happiness as a state of comfort and ease, feeling good in the moment. Meaning, though, is deeper. Meaning comes from belonging to and serving something beyond yourself and from developing the best within you.
幸福是一种舒适安逸的状态,即当下感觉良好。然而,意义更为深刻。意义来自于归属感、服务于超越自身的事物,以及挖掘自身的最大潜能。
Seeking meaning is the more fulfilling path. People who have meaning in life tend to be more resilient.
寻求意义是一条更令人满足的道路。有人生意义的人才更具韧性。
resilient /rɪˈzɪliənt/ adj. 有弹性(或弹力)的;有适应力的;
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