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当你大概想表达的意思：
我花了很多时间思考，我们每个人如何才能活得更有意义？
终于我找到了答案，我们需要构建一些生活支柱，来创造有意义的人生。
第一个支柱是归属感。归属感来自于这样的关系 —— 你因真实的自我而被珍视，同时也珍视他人，它植根于爱，而非外在的标签。
第二个支柱则是目标：目标在于用你的优势服务他人，并为超越自身的事物做出贡献，而非仅仅追求个人快乐。
第三个支柱是超然：超然是超越日常喧嚣、不再以自我为中心，并感到与更高的现实或普世体验相连的时刻。
不会组织语言的人说的：
I have been thinking for a long time, how can we live a more meaningful life?
Finally I find the answers, we need make some life supports.
First support is belonging. You like others, others like you, we connect with others by love.
Second is goal. Having clear goals and serve for other using your advantages. Make more contribution rather than being happy by yourself.
Third is peace. Don't care about daily noise, have bigger world in your heart.
本篇没有明显的语法错误，主要问题是在词不达意，导致很多句子只能换个说法，真正想表达的没有表达出来
TED中超强组织语言
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I spent a lot of time wondering how each of us can live more meaningfully?
Eventually, I found the answer: we need to build some life pillars to create meaningful lives.
我花了很多时间思考，我们每个人如何才能活得更有意义？
终于我找到了答案，我们需要构建一些生活支柱，来创造有意义的人生。
pillar /ˈpɪlər/ n.支柱；核心，基础，支柱；柱子
The first pillar is belonging. Belonging comes from relationships where you’re valued for who you are and where you value others, rooted in love rather than external labels.
第一个支柱是归属感。归属感来自于这样的关系 —— 你因真实的自我而被珍视，同时也珍视他人，它植根于爱，而非外在的标签。
The second pillar is purpose: Purpose is using your strengths to serve others and contribute to something beyond yourself, going beyond personal happiness.
第二个支柱则是目标：目标在于用你的优势服务他人，并为超越自身的事物做出贡献，而非仅仅追求个人快乐。
The third pillar is transcendence: Transcendence is moments of rising above daily hustle, losing self-focus, and feeling connected to a higher reality or universal experience.
第三个支柱是超然：超然是超越日常喧嚣、不再以自我为中心，并感到与更高的现实或普世体验相连的时刻。
transcendence /trænˈsendəns/ n.超越；超然
hustle /ˈhʌsl/n.匆忙；忙碌喧嚣 v.催促(某人)；推搡
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