表达“女孩子们被培养得完美”的经历和观点（1）

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当你大概想表达的意思：

许多女性告诉我，她们倾向于选择自己 “一定会擅长”“一定会完美” 的职业。

这并不奇怪 。大多数女孩被教导要规避风险和失败，行事稳妥。

而男孩则被鼓励去冒，玩激烈的游戏。

成年后，无论是谈加薪还是约会，他们都习惯了一次又一次冒险，而且因此获得回报。

我们把女孩培养得完美，却把男孩培养得勇敢。

不会组织语言的人说的：

Many women tell me they like to choose jobs that they must be good at and must be perfect.

It is not strange. Most girls were told to avoid risks and failures, and should be careful when doing things. While boys were told to take risks, play dangerous games.

When they grow up, they get used to risking for money or dates. They take risks again and again and get benefits.

We teach girls to be perfect, but teach boys to be brave.

点评问题

1、语法错误，must be perfect 后面不能省略介词 in

2、中式英语，It is not strange. 正确的说法是 It's no wonder why. 或者This is not surprising. 

3、词不达意，激烈的游戏，不是play dangerous games. 可以用play rough games

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Many women I talk to tell me that they gravitate towards careers and professions that they know they're going to be great in, that they know they're going to be perfect in, and it's no wonder why.

许多女性告诉我，她们倾向于选择自己 “一定会擅长”“一定会完美” 的职业。这并不奇怪 。

gravitate/ˈɡrævɪteɪt/ v.被吸引到；受吸引而参加

Most girls are taught to avoid risk and failure. We're taught to smile pretty, play it safe, get all A's. Boys, on the other hand, are taught to play rough, swing high, crawl to the top of the monkey bars and then just jump off headfirst.

大多数女孩被教导要规避风险和失败，要笑得漂亮、行事稳妥、门门得 A。而男孩则被鼓励去冒险：玩激烈的游戏、爬高荡秋千、爬上单杠顶端后直接跳下来。

And by the time they're adults, whether they're negotiating a raise or even asking someone out on a date, they're habituated to take risk after risk. They're rewarded for it.

成年后，无论是谈加薪还是约会，他们都习惯了一次又一次冒险，而且因此获得回报。

We're raising our girls to be perfect, and we're raising our boys to be brave.

我们把女孩培养得完美，却把男孩培养得勇敢。