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你大概想表达的意思:不是直译,是当你大概想表达这个意思时,会怎么说?可以拓展很多内容,说的越多越好。
现代社会,独来独往的人越来越多。但我发现社交关系对我们真的非常有益,而孤独则会带来危害。我身边那些与家人、朋友还有一些社区联系得更紧密的人往往更幸福,他们的身体也更健康,并且还比那些基本没什么社交的人寿命更长。
不会组织语言的人说的:
These days, more and more people are alone.
But I find social is really good for us, and being lonely is bad.
The people around me who are close to their families, friends and others are happier. They are also more healthy. And they even live longer than lonely people.
问题:
1、But I find social is really good for us 这句中,social是形容词,不是名词,可以改为But I find social relationships are really good for us.
2、缺乏社交关系的人,不要只会说lonely people,下面TED中就用了多种表达:
people who are less well connected.
People who are more isolated. 等
TED中超强组织语言
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These days, more and more people are going solo.
如今,越来越多的人独来独往。
But I find that social connections are really good for us, and that loneliness kills.
但我发现社交关系对我们确实非常有益,而孤独是非常有害的。
Among the people around me, those who are more socially connected to family, to friends, to community are happier, and they live longer than people who are less well connected.
在我身边的人中,那些与家人、朋友以及社区的社交联系更为紧密的人更幸福,而且他们比那些社交联系没那么紧密的人寿命更长。
And the experience of loneliness turns out to be toxic. People who are more isolated than they want to be from others find that they are less happy.
而且事实证明,孤独的感受是有害的。那些比自己期望的状态更加孤立、与他人疏离的人会发现自己的幸福感更低。
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