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你大概想表达的意思:不是直译,是当你大概想表达这个意思时,会怎么说?可以拓展很多内容,说的越多越好。
我发现,过得最好的人是那些真正积极投入到人际关系中的人,无论是家人、朋友、还是一些社区里与人的交往。
可以是一些很简单的事情,比如把花在电子设备上的时间用来跟人相处。
或者主动联系很久没联系的家人。
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不会组织语言的人说的:
I find that the people who live a good life are those who often contact with their family, friends.
It can be some easy things. For example, spend less time on the phone. Spend more time on being with people.
Or just call your family who you have not been keeping in touch for a long time.
问题:
1、contact with their family 错误,contact为及物动词,其后直接接宾语,及contact their family
2、keeping in touch 后面需要加with,with介词不能掉,在从句里很容易忽略这类介词。
TED中超强组织语言
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I find that the people who fare the best are those who really lean into relationships, whether it's with family, friends, or in the community.
我发现,过得最好的人是那些真正积极投入到各种人际关系中的人,无论是和家人、朋友之间的关系,还是在社区里与人的交往。
It could be something as simple as trading screen time for time with people.
可以是一些很简单的事情,比如把花在屏幕上的时间用来与人相处。
Or livening up a dull relationship by doing new things together, like long walks or having date nights.
或者通过一起尝试新事物来为一段平淡的关系注入活力,比如一起去长时间散步或者定期安排约会之夜。
liven up 使xx 活跃起来 liven /ˈlaɪvn/ v.使高兴,使快活;快活起来;活跃起来
You could also reach out to that family member you haven't talked to for ages.
你也可以主动联系那位你已经好几年没说过话的家庭成员。
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